Acquainted With the White
[NOTE: This is a slightly edited version of a previous post.]
No, this isn’t a white supremacist ode. It’s about snow – something we’re experiencing here in New England today. And many other days.
The inspiration for this poem of mine: the snow, Robert Frost’s timeless “Acquainted with the Night,”and Gerard van Der Leun’s “Acquainted with the Blight.”
Just to make sure I receive full appreciation for the arduous work involved in writing it, I refer you to this. It explains terza rima, the convoluted rhyme scheme involved:
Terza rima is a three-line stanza using chain rhyme in the pattern a-b-a, b-c-b, c-d-c, d-e-d. There is no limit to the number of lines, but poems or sections of poems written in terza rima end with either a single line or couplet repeating the rhyme of the middle line of the final tercet…There is no set rhythm for terza rima, but in English, iambic pentameters are generally preferred.
So, without further ado, I bring you:
ACQUAINTED WITH THE WHITE
I have been one acquainted with the white.
I have walked out in snow–and back in snow.
I have watched drifts climb to impressive height.I have felt blizzard winds that rage and blow.
I have shuffled my muklukked, booted feet
And sniffled wanly, crying, “Woe, oh woe!”I’ve slipped on ice and skidded down the street
And heard those dying voices with my fall*
Then gone inside to fix myself a treat.“Snow is design of whiteness to appall,”**
My favorite poet would say, with keen insight.
(Just note his name; he’s called “Frost,” after all.)I’ve heard friends call me wrong, and far, far Right.
I have been one acquainted with the white.
*go here and scroll down to line 52
**go here and scroll down to the next to last line
OMG, neo, delightful!
You must’ve had fun
I recall opening Godel. Escher, Bach at random and reading (I never read it from beginning to end) and so much of its charm was the all the self-referential and meta material.
Marvelous!
“ The white” is also a Star Trek reference. In Deep Space Nine , the “ Dominion” used the drug/ food called “ the white” to control their genetically engineered warrior slaves.
It’s OK to be White, after all.
Jacques Bonhomme —> Jack Frost of Flyoverille.
G-E-B is a wonderful book. If you Google YouTube has the Crab Canon animated on a Möbius Strip.
A funny and ironic given present circumstances story about Goedel’s US Citizenship Interview:
https://io9.gizmodo.com/the-mathematician-who-showed-how-the-us-could-be-made-a-1607024259
And a good poem too.
Wonderful, and so deft. Thank you!
Is a winter landscape to be regarded as a desolation? I enjoy the quiet of the land when there’s plenty of snow.